Its kinda silly, but i wrote it :] is it any good? opinions anyone?

Question: Its kinda silly, but i wrote it :] is it any good!? opinions anyone!?

This Is My Life

This is my life;
No one can live it for me!.
My life is full of secrets;
This is true, I can guarantee!
No one really knows me;
they see of me what I choose to reveal!.
Thus, my identity is safe for no one to steal!
So to all of you who think you know me,
Think again;
Because you're full of bologna!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Really humorous! I like it! I'm guity of hiding what I really am inside and I disclosed that to a trusted friend!. Do you know what they told me!? They told me that I shouldn't do that because people would be missing out on a truly wonderful personality!.
Great poem! Keep writing and thanks for sharing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Because you're full of bologna! !?!?!?!?!?
hahah what!

try not rhyming every line!.
its cute but :))Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's good and funny at the end!. But I can't dicide if younger children would like it better because it's kind of serious!. I still like it though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good job :) Keep writing poetries, you'll keep getting better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this; it vaguely harbours a deeper meaning but the packaging is CUTE!. If you know what I mean!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good outlook on life,,,,
pretty good poem!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's really good

LolWww@QuestionHome@Com

they see of me what I choose to reveal!.

my favourite line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com