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Question: Poem/thing!.!.!.!.!.!.tell me what you think!?
Today was just like any other day,
I woke up, ate, had a shower and went to work!.
I spent about eight hours dwelling on what I am doing,
And I faced more fake faces then I could say!.
So by the end of the day I relised something,
My life has become a routine that spells out three words,
I'm going nowhere, so I determine I am not satisfied,
And to top it off, I was about to loss everything!.

I got in my car after the train,
I called you up and asked to see you,
It was merely routine and the call had no substance,
And besides, it was pouring down rain!.
I went to your house and asked you to leave,
I didn't really have a plan let alone a destination,
And the car fuel was already running low,
But my sore heart, was clearly on my sleeve!.



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it seems good= needs a little work= but from your heart = you might add at the end that as you drove away= just praying that your low feul would last another day=Www@QuestionHome@Com