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Question: Poem - Keeper of my heart!.!.!.what u think!?
Keeper of my heart
captor of my soul
Do you not know
the moment my essence
you stole

Do you not know
You hold my heart
on a string
Do you not see
when we fly
how I cling to your wings

For without you
I have nothing at all
Without your wings
to hold me up
I fear I will fall

Into the darkness
from which I came
Wandering alone
with only myself
to blame

Sometimes
the string breaks
guided my my blade
I destroy that
for which I longed for
and prayed

This mind so lost
never ending
doubts and fears
Knowing that I've
destroyed the one
thing I hold dear

Hold me now
hold me close
Don't leave me here
alone with these ghosts

I am so fragile and broken
unsure of myself
Don't leave me alone
to gather dust on this shelf

Your wings so broad
so strong
Carry me to where
I belong

with you!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
BE-YOU-TI-FULL! soo deep! rock on sister! hey, when you become famous for that poem can you loan me 500 bucks!? just kiddin! <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

complete and utter contrived crap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice - well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol whats the question!?
haha jk
yer poem is so deep, awesome job!!Www@QuestionHome@Com