Do you think my poem is good...?

Question: Do you think my poem is good!.!.!.!?

What is wrong with me
It's a very long list
Everytime i reach for something i always seem to miss
I feel so out of place
Like i dont really belong
I always feel that way
I've felt it all along

Be honest!.!.!.thanx :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

:( Sry if that is all or partly from me :(
<3 I Love You <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

It has good rhythm and expression and captures the reader's attention!. OK--so I'm old-fashioned, but I like to see punctuation --like a question mark after the first line, a coulple of commas, periods etc!. and capital letters instead of i!.

Keep writing! You seem to have a knack for it! Have you given your poem a title!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not to be harsh or anything but I think I heard this in a song, a hilary duff song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If by good you mean boring as hell, then it's awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Vair vair Good!. PUBLISH IT AND GAIN MILLIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!. RULE THE WORLD WITH YOUR SUPERIOR POETRYNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is really good, amazing! I'd break up the 3rd line between "something" and "I", though!. Keep up the great work!. God bless!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com