Voice opinion please on poem.?

Question: Voice opinion please on poem!.!?

“Home Sweet Home”!.

Oh where’s my home which I once stayed,
The one of which has gone astray,
It gave me shelter from winds and rain,
It protected me from harms way,
It gave me strength when I was week,
It gave me nourishment for me too eat,
It gives me oxygen for me to breath,
It is, it is, those lovely trees!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!!! also this is the only poem about a house! Finally nobody ever talk about one!.!.!.!. but what does "It gave me nourishment for me too eat, " means!? I wonder!.!.!.!. (not to sound rude!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Too conforming!.
Release yourself and convey your true emotion!.
Say what you are trying to say and damn the conformityWww@QuestionHome@Com

alright but dont like the last line dont rhyme cause it has the s on the endWww@QuestionHome@Com

very nice but needs more umph!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it gave me painWww@QuestionHome@Com