Viw on unfinnished poem?

Question: Viw on unfinnished poem!?

This poem is not yet complete!. I don't realy have a tittle as yet!.
Maybe call it "Departed soul mates!"!. Not sure but here is what i got so far!.!.!.!.!.

My heart and soul cries out your name,
Our past attempts all gone in vein,
Our cherished dreams and wish once was,
Now a shadowy haze of vapouring salts,
Our souls connected and made complete,
You give me strength when I am week,
For in our hearts we were meant to be,
Soul mates forever for eternity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its pretty ok!.!.!.though a few spellings play spoilsport!
but apart frm d it ok!.!.!.maybe d last line can simply be "Soul mates - for eternity"!.!.just a suggestion!.!.!.!.keep trying and as for d title!.!.urs is pretty good!.!.straighforward!.!.i cant think of nythng bttr rt ow!.!.
peace,cheers 'n respect!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My heart & soul cries out your name
Our past attempts have all gone in vain
Our cherished dreams & wishes that once was
Now like a shadowy haze,
misty & blurry
Help me find my way, cause without you
I am like the blind without a cane!.

Our souls have connected and felt complete
I have since wondered how my life would be if you were not in it !.
You give me strength when I am weak,
For in our hearts we were meant to be,
Soul mates, now and for eternity !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good so far! I LOVE IT TOO!!! I think that wouls be a good title for your poem full of emotion!.!.!.!. Keep writting! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com