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WHAT DO YOU Think(sorry caps lock, don't feel like erasing!.!.!.) about my poem!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. its weird!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. BEWARE(that wasnt caps lock)!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.




What is July!?
By: Erin Hill


The warm breeze,
The clear sky
The bear knees
It’s the month of July!

What is July!? Well…

Its sipping lemonade
On a blazing afternoon
It’s sitting in the shade
Thinking of last June

It’s buying new bathing suits
To go to the pool
It’s selling your winter boots
‘Cause now it’s not cool

It’s going to summer camps
And having lots of fun
It’s trying new rollerblade ramps
And playing in the sun

It’s making memories
With your friends
It’s showing your buddies
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The poem looks good
My interest it grew
I like the theme of it
which sounds very true!.!.!. :-)

(ahhh!.!.!.!.i m not good at it) :-(Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem Erin!!! You should have done it for the poetry cafe!.!.!. easy A+ I think!!! You should publish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!.



-Moon ChildWww@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it, it was very well written and very trueWww@QuestionHome@Com

One giant cliche!. Kill it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com