Some people dont understand this poem.. can u?

Question: Some people dont understand this poem!.!. can u!?

i wrote this like 6 months ago!.!.!.!.!.
wondering if u can understand it =)

Do you remember, relive, recall
Those late night talks
With your back to the wall
Can you still picture
The sunset you saw
What a beautiful scene
Should leave you in awe
Do you still let go
By crying in the rain
Holding tightly to your head
Trying to soften the pain
Can you still give comfort
Like you did as a child
Though you never understood
You were tender, you smiled
Do you still kneel
By your bed, eyes closed
Quietly saying a prayer
Your heart was exposed
Can you still wake up
With a smile on your face
Ready to start the new day
No problems to embrace
Do you still take time
To love, to laugh, to learn
These things seem so simple
But growth, you will earn

(im 14)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its beautifull

wen i read this poem!.!.i just imagined the whole thing
kind of picturised it in my mind
its very nice!.!.!.!.

u r 14 and u wrote this poem!.!.!.!.u r blessed!.!.!.got talent dear

god bless uWww@QuestionHome@Com

you r taking about!.!. like when you are just so stressed and you feel horrible!. because of life/love!. and u wonder to yourself how can you still move on when everything is holding you back!. how can you love if inside you feal broken!. how can you still see the sun if its pooring rain!. how can your life be so simple one moment and then complex the next!. and when you were younger everything was so simple!. and now everyday something allways happends to ruin it!. && when will this end!. when will you ever get your happy ending!.

im 14 too(;Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, that is a really really great poem!. ur talking bout someone being so tender during childhood, then as they grew older they became saddened!. so they cry and pray to god things will get better!. then u r there asking if they take time to laugh,love and learn!. so when they grow through their tears they learn lifes lesson!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I understand it!. It's beautifully written, well versed and good diction!. Did she/you move away!? Sort of drifted off!? Not trying to pry, no need to answer if it's personal, just want to see if I'm on the right tracks!.

Two words!.!.!.keep writing!.
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.well uh!.!.what i cn understand here is that,!.!.um ur talkin to someone!?
!.past things u've done before but somehow 'someone, or something' "diverted" all ur actions to 'nothing!.!.'!?

thats why the words you (writer) used are interrogative!.!.!?
well!.!.thats how i undrstand it!.!.though!.!.its just the words and nt the meaning of the poem!.!.

anyways!.!.its nice
keep up;/Www@QuestionHome@Com

at 14 i think it's a gr8 start!.!.!.i see no reason reason y ppl don't understand this poem!.!.!.!.it's quite nice!.!.!.having said that i think a couple of lines are not perfectly written but wid a lil modification i think it would be perfect!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i get it!. i think ur telling me that that someone is not happy anymore and needs time to love laugh learn!.to be like they once were!. i think idk!. what ur telling me is kinda skipping!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah you are reminiscing about your childhood when life was easy and tension free and you looked forward to everything and enjoyed everything!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would think it was about your life in a simple time before you had stresses or those problems you get as you get older!.

It is very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, but I don't think a person who is 14 years old should be experiencing these things!. I'm in 8th grade and I don't believe people from elementry to middle school should go on dates!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey dts pretty good!.!.!.!.as i understand it!.!.its smthnf abt losing ones childish innocence as one grows up!.!.rt!?!?!.!.!.well maybe u culd hav brought out d last part with bolder srokes of irony!.!.!.but dts ok!.!.!.keep it up!.!.n keep trying!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow that's beautiful I saying this coz you are 14 and you have a good talent I'll send this to my handsome husband!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! Looks like you're a natural at poetry!. I can understand!. I think those who can't, haven't been through all that, that's why they fail to understand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow thats an amazing poem!.
I cant believe you're 14
You have a real talent for poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. that was really good!. i understand it!.
are you sure you're 14!?

coz that was really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it!.!.!. Thanks for sharing !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow great poem!.!.!.I get it at least!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

about a child!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, I can't believe you are only 14! This sounds like what some famous modern poet would write!. I can understand this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's good, wonderful!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com