A new effort by me? What do you think of it?

Question: A new effort by me!? What do you think of it!?

A seed in soil!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A seed in the womb!.
Germination!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Procreation!.
A seedling sprouts!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A fetus grows!.
The ground breaks!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.The water breaks!.

New life from the earth!.
New life from birth!.

The tree will grow!.
The child will sow!.

More seeds!.
Life will continue!.
Thank God!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Man! This is from that list of adjectives that Elaine banned earlier!.!.!.the Trigee's S-2 and S-3 blew me away!. Well Done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one is wonderful!! Everything from the meaning to the rhythm!. I love how you compared the two types of life!.!.!.and yes, thank God it continues!. Life is magnificent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, thank God!
I like the poem because it holds alot of meaning(for me anyway)
who doesn't like the thought of a new baby=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The ban has been lifted as of this past Midnight!. This is definitely beautiful and amazing!. I love the combination of poetic forms!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! You have mastered this art of poetry, and I like the dual couplets followed by the final stanza!.

WOW!

Great writing!.
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The story of love and life - and it's wonderful culmination!. I enjoyed the poem's structure!. It flowed well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A genuinely fasinating adaptation of a trigee!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Creativity, please!.!.!. try harder!. You can do it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

GO SEMP!!!! GO SEMP!!!! I love this man!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good, very good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

EXTREEEEEMELY WONDERFUL!!!
Love Ya Semp!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have done well with this! The ground breaks!.!.!.the water breaks, especially strong to me!. You get a star!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!. It's great!! Great job (: I'd like to see more of your poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com