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Position:Home>Poetry> I wrote a Poem about my Crush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?Question: I wrote a Poem about my Crush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!? Is it good!?
he is the reason you put on extra lip gloss the kind of guy who makes you feel like your so lost he lights your fire like you drank a glass of hot sauce He ignites your soul without warning, Hes the reason you get up in the morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That's not a poem- it's more like a couple of sentences separated by skipping lines!. Honestly, it's very dull and not at all artistic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love this line "he lights your fire like you drank a glass of hot sauce" lol that must be one hot fire!! its a very awesome line to a very awesome poem! I like it alot 10/10!. Others may not like it but its true and straight forward ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com Drinking hot sauce is unpleasant so maybe you should find another analogy!. also, in the fourth line it's "you're" not "your" Other than that, pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If thats the way he makes you feel and you like it then will you be showing it to him!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com its really sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com |