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Let me wake you up gently-
as the light of diffused amber halo
within morning rain drops;
tenderly
hopping
numberless
steps

of the spriralling tendrils-
your hair!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.precious!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I can suggest the following for this poem:-

let me wake gently with
morning rain drops
diffused by the light of an amber haloWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!. We Piscesians are like that!.


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