Do you agree with my Fuku?

Question: Do you agree with my Fuku!?

This word was coined by a poet named T!.D!. Euwaite!. It is Haiku in form, but has hatred or evil as its subject!.

A Fuku on War
by Elaine P

They fight and they die
For a country that hates us;
They need to come home!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is not a haiku!.!.!.!.it is not about nature (gotcha!!!) I have been waiting to say that!. So this is a fuku eh!? Can I give it a whirl!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Glorious, have you scoped out the microsoft haikus!? I'll put a link in just in case you haven't!. Thanks for the new realm of literary enterprise (I think)

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http://www!.freerepublic!.com/focus/f-news!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

One wee thought, Elaine!. Shouldn't the second line end in "them", instead of "us"!?

Re:Danny: No, you misread the intent of the Fuku!.
Okey dokey, so in that case, shouldn't this be a Fukwe!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

your Fuku doesn't seem full of hatred or evil!. More the voice of reason with a touch of despair!.

Here is mine

When we convict them
Hang all of them, Hang them high
we are not afraidWww@QuestionHome@Com

GOOD! It does not claim to be what it isn't and it proclaims strongly what it is!. Brave, real and pure on all fronts!Www@QuestionHome@Com

For a poem to be successful, it must contain some form of truth!.!.!.!.this certainly does, and it succeeds on every level!
Well done, madam!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with it politically and poetically!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

They socialize
the masses with false freedoms
and call it a choice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I certainly do agree!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with your Fuku!. Well said in just a few words!. The title is catchy !Www@QuestionHome@Com

A little bit too simple!. Where's the imagery!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I couldn't agree with your 'Fuku' more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don`t know what to say besides, FUKU!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You guys are killing me! HA!Www@QuestionHome@Com

not badWww@QuestionHome@Com

i agree but it is very simpleWww@QuestionHome@Com

Fukus Haikus all
seasons change!.!.!. hate still lingers
controlling us allWww@QuestionHome@Com