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Question: Sleep well my love; Do you like my Love poem!?
Sleep well my love
I watch you sleep tonight my love
Purifying the air with each breath
Your chest it rise and falls
To give my heart, its purpose
You keep your eyes closed
So the room can remain darkened
Yet, your face it shines
Like one of Gods angels
I long for day to break
To see open eyes and smiles
Spirit, renewed and determined
To find new fears to conquer
We have become one flesh
In design and nature
And with all life’s tests
It’s our love, that makes us stronger
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I like the first 3 paragraphs!. The 4th one seems to narrow it down to a lover's poem!. Without the 4th, it could work for me & my little daughter!.!.!. It's so sweet & beautiful!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your love poem is so delightful and appealing!. I have the picture of you staying awake just to watch your love sleep, and that is so very romantic, tender!. Very heartwarming!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As the song sings," So in love am I with you my love" and
"Isn't it Romantic" Very nice tribute to your love!. Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Being the hopeless romantic that I am, I can never pass up a love poem! Very well written, I enjoyed it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your poem speaks volumes!. Very nicely written!. Thanks for sharing another good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lovely poem of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Tis a well done poem of love, thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I LOVE IT!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very Good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it, write more love poems!. Really nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
!.whoa!.!.!
its really romantic and passionate!.!.
it makes me wanna feel: i hope i'm the "you" and we are the "we" u wrote there!.!.LOL!
i apreciate it!.!.keep up;/Www@QuestionHome@Com
Honestly!?!.!.!. I think it's kind of cheesy and like the thing a teenager would imagine love to be!.
But it's just an opinion, don't freak out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW!.!.!.I LOVE THIS!!!
ur rly good love!
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