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Question: Can you call this a poem!?
Death
It could come once or twice
Life
You can live for the future or the past
Love
You can have it all or nothing at all
Friends
You can have both, the good and the bad
Family
Nuclear, atomic or even chronic
Job
To destruct or to construct

All the things in my life
Is it complete!?
What I'm really searching for !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sure, and it sounds really meaningful too!. Btw, you only should put 3 periods at the end!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good poem!.
You might rethink the two all's in the sixth line, and is the last line supposed to be a question!? I thought it was, but then when I read it again, it wasn't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good - I started reading because you asked but kept reading because it held my attention!.

I agree - three dots!.Www@QuestionHome@Com