Poem I wrote, lookin for feedback.?

Question: Poem I wrote, lookin for feedback!.!?

I have no title for this poem!.

Lay before the clouds of tomorrow
and journey with the tides of sorrow
and wonder if you'll row just past the undertow
and climb inside your own souls windowWww@QuestionHome@Com

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For being so short it sure packs in a lot of emotion! I really like it, your talented and I'm jealous, haha!. Keep writing! And posting!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it rhymes, but I don't know what its about!. A title is important when it comes to poems, because they put the reader in the right setting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it, very deep!. You're very talented!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

so far so good
honestly you should make it longer it will turn out much much better
but you do have potentials
keep up the great work
and good lucksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great ,small, but good!! ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree it's deep!.
I like it!!
Keep writing!
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