Once again I am looking for
Good critiques!.!.and possible ways to!.!.enhance my poetry, any worthwhile feedback is very much appreciated!
This one I did in about 15 minutes- so It may not be the best I've ever written but!.!.!.!.
Into the depths of dreams I creep
While in a trance; a slumber deep!.
All is still, though thy heart is ill!.!.
So lost amongst the haze
Are the old forgotton days
Two lovers strolling hand in hand!.!.
Amidst a never- ending land!.!.
The ghosts remain a gentle breeze
Winding through the darkened trees!.
So treaturous that strong gale blew!.!.
Tearing me away from you!.!.
Parting us in two directions, that it seems!.!.
Though years hath past; your eyes I see!.!.even in the faintest dreams!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com