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Question: Awaiting reunion Poem!. Honest response and critiques welcomed!?
Awaiting reunion

Water ripplets show vivid undulation,
In retrospect of ones imagination,

Marigold released from the seagulls beak,
Falls floating across the oceans reefs,

I clench tenaciously onto rosemary leafs,
Calmly palplate the crystal blue waters of your countenance,

Revealing the unclouded vaults of heavens door,
Bright illuminating sun apears late in fall,

Cherubs singing graciously, Soulful melodies,
Playing subtle music, of the harp strings, joyously,

As i turn my head gracefully, to the heavenly sky,
Attentively watch two doves fly by,

Mesmerized, gazing with glee,
Energize, rejuvenate, exploring the shoreline which awaits,

Vigorously envision my spirit fly free,
As our two souls rejoice in glee,

Indulge in fresh fruits,
Sipping vint juice,

As two doves fly freely ascending through heavens eye,
The dove is just a reresentation of me,

As I wake from the dreams of possibilities,
Awaiting the stage, for stars of bethlehem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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