I thought
I had
a poem!.
Miss Fix It
told me
no!.
But I say
to Miss
Know-it-all
I mean
Fix It
Random words
do not
a critique
make!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I had a poem!. Miss Fix It told me no!. But I say to Miss Know-it-all I mean Fix It Random words do not a critique make!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Worry not about critiques it seems we're all honored merit badges for trying Wear this one well there's surely more coming! I have 20 plus! Can you beat that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com This poem is clever and well written, but might have unintended consequences!. As for me, I try never to critique a critique lest it discourage others from commenting on my work!. What I have seen you post has been very good!. Don't let one bad critque get under your skin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hey! Chill out!. You asked for her advice, so deal with it!. Any way, random angry words don't make a poem either!. Remember that if you actually want to get something published you're going to have to put up with a lot of criticism!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I guess if she could fix it, Miss p would be a streak!. Of course she'd have the help, Of one called Jesus Freak!. Neither one would have a clue, What does and doesn't rhyme!. I like to teach the two of them, But just don't have the time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com And the winner take all! Your poem was thought-out and backed up with truth!.!.!.a thought-provoking piece of writing!.!.!.goodonyer!!! 20 plus what, Neonman!?!?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Miss Fix it can't mix it all she can do is nix it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com How can someone call themself that if they never offer any help or advice!? Just "FIX IT!." Hel-loooooo!?Www@QuestionHome@Com awwww!. nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com |