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Question: Can Miss Fix It help me fix this!?
I thought
I had
a poem!.

Miss Fix It
told me
no!.

But I say
to Miss
Know-it-all
I mean
Fix It

Random words
do not
a critique

make!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Worry not about critiques
it seems we're all honored
merit badges for trying

Wear this one well
there's surely more
coming!

I have 20 plus! Can you beat that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem is clever and well written, but might have unintended consequences!. As for me, I try never to critique a critique lest it discourage others from commenting on my work!.

What I have seen you post has been very good!. Don't let one bad critque get under your skin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey! Chill out!. You asked for her advice, so deal with it!. Any way, random angry words don't make a poem either!. Remember that if you actually want to get something published you're going to have to put up with a lot of criticism!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I guess if she could fix it,
Miss p would be a streak!.
Of course she'd have the help,
Of one called Jesus Freak!.

Neither one would have a clue,
What does and doesn't rhyme!.
I like to teach the two of them,
But just don't have the time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And the winner take all!
Your poem was thought-out and backed up with truth!.!.!.a thought-provoking piece of writing!.!.!.goodonyer!!!

20 plus what, Neonman!?!?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Miss Fix it
can't mix it
all she can do
is nix

it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How can someone call themself that if they never offer any help or advice!? Just "FIX IT!."
Hel-loooooo!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

awwww!.

nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com