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Question: I wrote a poem what do you think of it!?
While entwined in this cup of dense emotions
our bodies seem to make this bitter sweet potion
yo body and my body nevertheless
combined
while i whisper in your ear
"you're forever mines"
feeling this room with our emotions
yo body's tellin me that you like my potion of
love
holding me like yo sheets
while you tell me dont hold back
moan
and grit yo teeth
emotions get mild as pain intenses
pains get mild and emotions comvince me that
i can leave my pain in the past
and not think about my first
but
think about my last love
cuz
when its all said and done
another like you there wont be one
so if you ride for me
ima ride for you
and we gone stick 2getha just like bonnie and clyde doWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds like a rap!.!.!. With a beat and some editing could make a good rapWww@QuestionHome@Com