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I thought!.!.!. about everything
And how you used to be
And how you could go on
Just by replacing me

I didn't think it was right
Or that it was fair
Now I have to go on
But go on where!?

You left me hanging
Hanging out to dry
I wish I had wings
Then away from you I could fly

I thought!.!.!. I could trust you
But of course, I was wrong
Something I should've known
I should've known all along

Trusting you is a joke
A joke I shouldn't have said
So now I don't like thinking about you
I sit here wondering instead

While you're off
Having a good old time
I sit here thinking
Of when together, we were fine

You messed up our relationship
For that, you can't repay me
You're mean and crude
And not to mention lazy

I thought!.!.!. we wouldn't talk anymore
You'd live your life, and I'd live mine
You had to mess that up to
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