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Question: So what do you think about this poem i wrote!?
Title: Put the gun down !!!


One day you’ll see…
Every path you’ll take you’re leaving your legacy
How many times you have to run
From my deep whisper!?
And how long you can resist
In this smooth criminal!?
You must to face the truth
I know how it’s strange
But the fire must calm at the end
This is how you should carry on in this land
Love can thrill you…
But he will never break you
Believe me…
I’m your destiny…
So there’s no place to run…
It’s time to show me your gun…!.!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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