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Question: Rate my fathers day poem!!?
Superdad
Your the bomb,
And the match,
You make me smile and Laugh,
Your the greatest and the bestest,
Dad around,
You work,
You clean,
You do everything,
You may even sing,
I belive you are super dad,
You belive you are dad,
Super dad is more for you,
Becasue you do everything and more,
You love,
You care,
You work so hard,
You feed me,
You help me,
You listen to me,
You help me with my worst problems,
And I now tell you thank you,
I may not tell you everyday that you are super dad,
But in your heart you know it just like me,
You are super dad and always will be,
No matter what happens You keep the title super dad,
Becasue I bought it for you,
Ok ok you earned it,
Everyday you earn it everday you live up to it
I love you superdadWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wooww!!! gr8!!! jst lyk ur odr poemzz!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would say that he is lucky to have a daughter who loves and admires him so much, but it isn't luck!. Like you said, he's earned it!. Before you show it to him fix the spelling!. It's "because'' and "believe!." He probably already thinks your perfect, but it won't be a bad idea to prove it with perfect spelling!. Make sure that when you show him the poem you have a box of tissues with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think it was an AWESOME poem give it to your dad and he'll love it i'm sure of it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. actually do you mind if i tell this poem to my dad on fathers day!.!.!.!.!. of course i'll say that i didn't write!.!.!.!. that another person did for their father and the poem reminded me of how i felt about him or something like that!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
how old are you !?
then i would know if you are truly good!. Lets say you were in your mid 20s then your father's day poem would be rated low!.Www@QuestionHome@Com