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Question: Poem to my little one!?
To My Little One by Amanda J!. Garcia
I love you
For this is true!.
I can’t even see you
I know that you are there
But baby do you know I’m here!?
I don’t even know you
Yet I love you!.
I can’t even feel you
Do you feel my love!?
Can you hear my voice!?
Now I understand how
Grandma felt about me!.
Do you have daddy’s hair!?
Do you have my nose!?
What about daddy’s ears!?
Baby I love you
For this is true!.
Please don't take my poem and say its yours I worked really hard on this poem!.
I just need your guys opinion!. should i put it in my Poetry portfolio for school!? its one of the poems that make my final grade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is very sweet
I can't help but to wonder
if this for your child you are about to have
most people do one after someone has passed
on!.
Congratulations on the poem which helped you to
make your final grade!.
Writing poetry
This is an art
as well as a talent
You have an art a talent
and interest for writing poetry
I too work on my poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is not meant to be harsh, putting anything on QA is brave and this is only my view and therefore subjective!.
Poetry is very persoanl!.
This is a little 'light weight'
I think you can go deeper and do better!.
If it is only a 'make weight' to complete an excellent folder then it will be okay, but if you are relying on this to get you serious marks then I feel you should dig a little deeper!.
How can you do this if you don't have a baby of your own!?
Observe young mothers (which I am sure you have) but try and see the 'expressions' on their faces and then put them into the emotions they are feeling inside!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
aw, congrats :)
this is adordable!.
i love everything about this poem!.
my bf is hispanic, i love the culture, that's besides the point but we have already picked out names (well rebecca rae is the top one; they arent hispanic though, ok im rambling sorry)
anyway, your poem is quite lovely and charming!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes definently! It's well written and flows together nicely!. Your teacher will like seeing some humanity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
awwWww@QuestionHome@Com
Wow what a great poem!. I get the feeling you may be blind or maybe not there!. anyway I love it well done
God blessWww@QuestionHome@Com