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Question: Wot do you think of this poem!?
The sky is blue
And i have the flue
I walk down the street
And i bend down to tie my shoe
im walking down the street
And i fall on my feet
My feet start to bleed
But i have to take the lead
For i am the first seed
So much pressure
More than i need
I think im sure
That i am what i want to be
But what is this all for
Why am i ansawring the call
This is not who i want to be
So i take of my shoe
And run away
just be free
My poems are vry simple!.!.!.
so i just wont ur honest opinion just say wot u feel!.!.!.!. :)
p!.s english is a second language to me so yeah!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
just keep on writing,the language is comingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Well, at first I thought it was just okay, but once I got to the end I started to understand it!. I thought it was really good! The rhyming was great and I loved the ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really don't understand this work at all!. To me its trash!. Your enlgish studies must have just started!. My cat can meow something better than this!.
I don't care to comment any futher!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It started pretty well but you lost your feet!.
Great for a second language, so so as a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com