Goodbye - A Poem Of Suicide.?

Question: Goodbye - A Poem Of Suicide!.!?

[Please read, and review, but please say more then 'I like it!.' or 'I don't really like it!.' id like critisism, both good and bad, but i'd like opinions to make it better also!.
One warning though: DO NOT Call me emo, i was really happy when I wrote it, and on the phone to my current boyfriend, about a year ago!. so my writing skills have developed since this poem!.]

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow!.!.!.this is amazing!.!.!.it is truely great i loved it
i asked to be your friend on bebo so i can read it anytime i want!.!.!.it really speaks and it is truely amazing that i was your first poem!.!.!.my name is Lucifers Angel so please add me :DWww@QuestionHome@Com