I don't write very much but I wrote this thing and was wondering how good ot

Question: I don't write very much but I wrote this thing and was wondering how good other people thought it was!?

I feel so sick and abused
as you sit there amused

I try to move on
but the feelings just aren't gone

I don't want anymore
My heart feels so sore

So I try to take things day by day
and find my way

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I really like it!. I can feel how sad u r!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

keep trying !.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

kinda depressing !.!.!.!.

it's an ok poem

could be betterWww@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it!.!.!.needs some fine tuning though!Www@QuestionHome@Com