Just a bit. and only a bit. what do you think?

Question: Just a bit!. and only a bit!. what do you think!?

I drew a photograph of you
if only in my heart
by the lake with your hair streaming
and the ripples of every way wave whisper
yea, she is the one for me
i heard your voice on the speakerphone
in a tone so subdued
laughing at surely only me
and a white noise chatter
yea, i know, she is the only one
i threw rocks at your window,
i threw my heart at your panes
i'll take the broken glass, well
if not for the chainsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I have only imagined you as a poet, till now!. You have a way with the heart; unchained!.

Thanks for sharing with us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. I like it a lot!. I'm going to think about it while I cook dinner and then give a longer answer!.!.!.

I can't quite think how to describe it!. It's captured something elusive and put it in to words in a manner that makes it very real!. Usually a poem attempting to describe what this one describes would come out tacky and too emo, but you've avoided that nicely!.

The only improvement I can think of would be to make it longer!.!.!.as someone else said, I didn't want it to end lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice I like the part where it says she is the only one
i threw rocks at your window,
i threw my heart at your panes
i'll take the broken glass, well
if not for the chains

amazing I wanna read more lol I didnt want it to end :[Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well well well, poetry too!. The first part sure takes a turn for the worse,!.ouch baby ouch,!.!.!.wonderful and so sad!.

(((B8tm))) Wonderful and Brilliant always!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing speaks so bitter sweetly as a broken heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

interestingWww@QuestionHome@Com

A bit more, I think!. Very good!.!.!.!.and here I thought you only wrote wordless poetry!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sound so gently!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ah, 8 track!.!.!.!.!.very lovely and so!.!.!.I don't even know !.!.!.!.!.!.!.just you:)Www@QuestionHome@Com