My small poem please comment?

Question: My small poem please comment!?

Fiery Bird

Fiery bird spread proud to fly
frolic in playful dance
peak and dive lyrically high!.
Treetop towers lye restful young
Early bird flutter the morn
In tangerine skies it sung!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I love the feel and sensations of colors and buoyancy in the poem! It's wonderful!. It gave me a gorgeous picture, tou descri be things so vividly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem was very short and sweet, very nice!. It was very deep and uplifting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great , it has a rhythm to it and a smooth flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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OH it's so pretty! It is almost like a classic verse, I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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short and sweet poem!.!.!.!.

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