Do you get my second poem ?

Question: Do you get my second poem !?

Busy life

Sun
Day
Sunday
Day
Sun

Star
Light
Starlight
Light
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You have reprised your previous poem's style and form!. The two stanzas are connected because the sun is also a star, but also because a sun seen at night is called a star, not a sun, so it would indeed be a "busy life"!. The connections within each stanza are the same type of multiple meanings you created in your first poem, but they lack the noun/verb duality of your first poem!.

Still, clever form, clean write, but some combinations work better than others!.

!.!.!.keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

the sun comes out in the day and sunday = sun + day

a star makes light and starlight = star + light

and busy life because it goes for the sunny day to the starlight and you work hard!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah i get it but it doesnt seem like a poem!.!.!.jsut a list of words!.!.!.!.!.!.how about this!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

hammer
mill
hammermill
mill
hammerWww@QuestionHome@Com

actually I am not understand to your question but i Think you are made poem i get your poem nice very nice!. I love this poem!. OhhhWww@QuestionHome@Com

its niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

interesting!.!.!.!. in awe!.!.!.!.

(JK)

No, that's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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whatsd to get!?!?!? =SWww@QuestionHome@Com