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Question: Christians, what do you think!.!?
I dont want atheists becuz they will probably make nasty comments about there dissagreement with my lyrics, but wat do u think!. I just wrote this quickly, so it aint very good, but what do you think!.



Searching blindly in the dark
Jesus found me
Opened my ears to hear the angels hark,
Showed me that to the father he was the key

On my path he was my light,
In him I found comfort during fright,
In him there is true delight
For he only can truly say he walked sinless and upright!.

Bought me with his body and blood,
Through a sacrifice only he could make,
And when it happened the whole earth quaked,
For he died, and it was my sins that were the sake

But death could not contain him
For he rose on day three
Conquering death and its hold,
Now all believers shout HE IS RISEN, HE IS RISEN INDEED, in jubilee
For we know we are saved

Only threw him can you come
For he is the way the truth and the life
For he layed down his life
That we may be saved and forgiven our sins

So, Kingdom Come,
Washed clean in the blood of Christ I come,
Through the hands of death and the devil I am from,
Though my sins are like scarlet, white as snow they have become,

But not of my own works
Threw a man with Called many things,
From Jesus of Nazareth, to Messiah, to Christ, to Son of God,
All of these titles apply,
But I call am proud to say, I call him My Lord, My Savior, My friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it very much!.

The lyrics works correctly and I enjoyed reading the lyrics and feeling good about the lord!. really!.

I hope you make a good melody to this because the lyrics are there

The reader will be able to get a good christian spirit reading the lyrics!.

Did you write this!?

If you did, i encourage you to make a good song and let everyone hear it because it is truly song about finding the lord and understanding more about him!.

Good luck!. I reallly mean everything I say!. Hope you do good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it thank- you for sharing and may God bless you in every way!. May Jesus peace, love and joy wash over you this day and always
God blessWww@QuestionHome@Com

So great- i glad you at lest know of theses things!
put it out there and try to get a record deal- if you con sing, if you can't then find someone who can!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, wow! It's beautiful! Yaay! praise Jesus!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i loved that poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow i love it since it really makes me love Jesus Christ more and to be thankful to have him in our lives since we have him as our lord and savior, also friend, but may i add something to that Jesus is more then a friend he family, boy are we lucky to have him since he really loves us!. sorry but when i talk about Jesus or hear about him well i always feel like crying!. when you know him it really gives you a good feelingWww@QuestionHome@Com