Do u get my poem ?

Question: Do u get my poem !?

A story of an unfortunate family immigration

Gone
Wrong
Gone wrong
Wrong
Gone

Citizen
Ship
Citizen ship
Ship
CitizenWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Possibly!.!.!.you've chosen a very clever form and are using the art of multiple meanings to create word patterns that allow simultaneous interpretations!.!.!.such as "gone", without punctuation, followed by "wrong", again without punctuation, which could have been punctuated "gone!?" and "wrong!" followed by "gone wrong" as in "made the wrong choice" (one interpretation), then followed by "Wrong", as in the "wrong" they suffered before is now "gone" which is what ends the stanza!. The beauty here is that the interpretation above is only one of many, and the reader is forced to bring their own experience to the front in order to see the combinations with their own mind!. The second stanza, using the word "ship" to mean a vessel that travels the seas as well as a suffix for "citizenship", plus a ship full of citizens (since you didn't say "citizenship", you said "citizen ship", as in "troop ship")!.!.!.so once again you were able to create multiple images with simple word combinations and allow nouns to serve as potential verbs!.

Very clever, very clean, nicely done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes in fact i think that i DO get your poem!. They are random thoughts going round in your head and you are not happy with your move to the country you are in at the moment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I do get it!. I think it has to do with all the immigrators coming to New York and being separated or something!. Sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I get this it's clever!.
Gone wrong-
Wrong gone-
Citizen ship-
Citizrn ship-
Ship citizen- Lyk somethings gone wrong and then they wanna leave, then they get shipped as a citizen!.
Tell me if I'm wrong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think so!.!.!.Someone left their family to get citizenship overseas, it went awry and they got shipped back!.(!?!?!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Citizenship gone wrong!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are failing citizen ship !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

sending away immigrants!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Does it have to do with illegal immigrants!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

wrong citizen ship must go gone idk give it my best shotWww@QuestionHome@Com

No, not really!.

Those words can be put together!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I dunno!?!!?!!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

all I see is some words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh wow i just got it thats kinda cool!.!.!.!. pretty creativeWww@QuestionHome@Com

duh!.!.!.!.could'nt you come up with something a little bit better!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeh i get itWww@QuestionHome@Com

i get it!.!.!. pretty niceWww@QuestionHome@Com