Read this poem.?

Question: Read this poem!.!?

My heart
Is broken
I feel
Life
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Such true emotion!. I can feel the meaning emanating from this poem!. Lost Innocence aw Lost InnocenceWww@QuestionHome@Com

well it is a good start, but it does not exactly make your message clear!. poetry should serve as a window that leads into your inner self and people should be able to see and understand what you're saying and feeling!. do you feel you've lost your innocence!? why is your heart broken and who or what has broken it!? keep trying and im sure it will become a very relatable and or wonderfully respected piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry!. How can you even consider this a poem!? It's just a big cliche and no thought was put into it, don't listen to the people who tell you this is great because it is hardly even a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

such a beautiful tragedy, my friend!. sweet and simple!. now cheer up and write something happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

doesn't really feel like a poem!.!.!.!.!.but this piece of writing does show emotionWww@QuestionHome@Com

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i like it it shows your feelingsWww@QuestionHome@Com

short & sweet, yet expresses so much!. thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com