Like a lot of my poems, I'm still lost for a title!. :P
So dark, the ocean's black silence,
Devours my sight, dimmed by the cold!.
I must live to become balanced,
By the cruel waters of your soul!.
Blind, I've struggled to mount these waves,
White caps tainted by death's colours!.
Scared to submit to this harsh grave,
I fight your madness, hate's pallor!.
Once close, we've drifted through darkness,
Yet, I can tell you've missed me, too!.
Numb, I start feeling less and less,
For the warm tears wasted on you!.
Still connected, loved 'til this day,
I will scream with you from our pyre!.
Your dark ocean evaporates,
As our bond is erased by fire!.
Just to clarify!.!.!.this was about losing my best friend, not a boyfriend!. Please tell me what you think!.!.!.it's a new type of idea for me, so try to help me improve my ability to explore new things!. :) I think there's a problem with the rhythm, but I hope you can help me pinpoint what exactly it is!.
Peace! <3Www@QuestionHome@Com