Poem tell me what you think about it........ honest opinion please?

Question: Poem tell me what you think about it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. honest opinion please!?

Heres MY poem!. I don't want you to copy this !. !. !.

Ode to food(sing it to the tune of 'ode to joy')

I like ham and cheese and turkey also i like Barbaque
these foods are nutritious
these foods really are for me and you

Sausage hamberger and balonie
these foods are good to bad they're phony

I like ham and cheese and turkey also i like Barbaque!

By: Erin H!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That was terrible but i loved it, lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you should still work on your poetry!. Maybe try to give your poem a certain rhythm (i!.e!. the same number of syllables per line)!. also, I think it would be better if it rhymed better and if you made it longer!. Maybe you could also add some humour to it, since it is quite light-hearted!.

also, make sure to check your spelling and try to use less common or colloquial phrases (i!.e!. avoid "me and you" and "phony")!.

I hope this helps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's kinda creative!. Nice job for a poem about food faves!.

Two thunbs up pretty much! :DDDD

Thxz, byez!
~~~Www@QuestionHome@Com

It' relates to poetry the way comic books relate to reality in the dim light of a Brooklyn back alley!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No offense, but no one would copy this poem except to use it as a good example of a bad poem!. Sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tbh i think its crap!.

At least im honest though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its very simple
n it rhyms rly well

Gd Job :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's crap!. Sorry man!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yay Erin! Thats my little cousin!Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol,it was honestly funny!. lol=]Www@QuestionHome@Com