My poem "Fiery Bird" please read and comment?

Question: My poem "Fiery Bird" please read and comment!?

Fiery bird spread proud to fly
frolic in playful dance
peak and dive lyrically high!.
Treetop towers lye restful young
Early bird flutter the morn
In tangerine skies it sung!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I love the feel ans sensations of colors and buoyancy in the poem! It's wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kudos! really nice!. It gave me a colorful picture as i read it!.

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-Tilly :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

koolio poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

its very fabulasWww@QuestionHome@Com