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It is a great friendship poem, I hope you will give it to them someday!. I have a few suggestions to make it a little neater, if I may!?

As I was walking,
I saw these girls talking!.
When they started laughing,
I saw beautiful memories,
from the past, that touched my heart!.
Your funny jokes,that made me laugh hard!.
The times we were together!.
OH, I wish it had been longer!
I will always remember!.
Things when we were together!.
I love you my friend,
You are such a true friend!.
I will always miss you,
I hope you miss me too!.
I`ll never forget those precious days!.
In my heart no one can erase,
my memories with you!.
Together, forever and ever!.


Only my suggestions, no offense meant!. I corrected the punctuation and changed a few words only, the poem is still your main theme!. If not to your liking, sorry!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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That is a great poem!. I can tell you really mean every bit of what you said!. Send it to that friend, get together!. Maybe this poem will spark a rekindled friendship!. Go out there and make more memories!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I am sure they will love it because they will know that it comes from your heart why don't you send it to your friend its lovely
God blessWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I liked your poem and thought it nice that Poe was trying to help out!. I like some of the changes!. Nice poem for your friend!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Oh, im so touched!.!.!.
you are a nice friend
i wish someday one of my friends would write that poem for me!.
i would be just so happy!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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7+
I love it tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

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