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Question: This is for a dear friend, I want her to read it but am worried how she will take it, what do you think!.!?
I guess I failed,
you say you love me
but your self distruction button
knows no end,
seems the bottle
is far more of a friend!.

What can I do!?
for it's killing me,
to see it killing you,
and my love is stronger,
than the deadly brew,
I wish with all my soul,
you were the person I once knew!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it is soooooooo good show it to her/him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please don't show her!. An alchoholic is dependant on the bottle not on friends as you have found out to your cost!. They have to hit the bottom and realise they have a problem before they an ask for help!. She hasn't got there yet and this may rather than curing her send her diving straight don the neck of the nearest bottle!. You have to take a deep breath and wait for her to realise she has a problem and in the meantime you can do all you can to keep her well and safe from harm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thinks its lovely, sentimental and touching!.!.!.you should give it to her!.!.!.i would have!.!.!.
i think the word in third line is destruction!.!.!.not distruction!.!.!.i hope you dont mind me telling you that!.!.!.
hope it goes well!.!.!.:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a nice poem, but it could offend her incase she thinks it's aimed at her!. if it's aimed at her, i wouldn't show it to her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Show her it - she will accept what you say or not!.

You can then rest easy knowing you have done your best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Only suitable if your friend is an alcoholic!?Www@QuestionHome@Com