A poem which is called..... From The heart ... What do you think ?

Question: A poem which is called!.!.!.!.!. From The heart !.!.!. What do you think !?

From The Heart

Write a poem
From the heart
Where would you
Like me to start
With a love
That turn to hate
That could not be fixed
because it's to late
Or the child deep within
Who really didn't
commit no sin
Maybe the son
That run away
will he come back
to me some day
No this poem
From my heart
Is really to painful
For me to startWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!.!.!.the flow gets a little rocky in a few places like the line 'where would you, like me to start'!.!.!.think about rephrasing, it breaks the thought of the reader!. and change turn to 'turned'
and the 'who really didn't commit no sin' bad language, it takes away from the beauty you truly have within the poem!.

and change run to 'ran' - correct usage!.

great poem! Keep writing, I like your style

GeneWww@QuestionHome@Com