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Question: My new poem!.!.!.any good!?
I havent written in ages, but this one seemed to come from nowhere!.


Dark Passenger

Dark passenger
riding shotgun
sitting
on the forefront
of my mind!.
Tell me I need you
When I’d be better off
without you
need your touch
just to make it through
when it’s what you do
that tells me
I should be through
With you
Say sorry to be
One of your vices
If I should guess
What your advice is
I’d say it’s untouchable
A sense to be untamed
When it’s me you’ve maimed
Dark passenger,
I’ll drop you here
Just to pick you up
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!! I kind of got the message of addiction right off, but I guess others would have to think about it a little more, but overall, it was GREAT!!
Keep up the good work!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's different!.
It quite hard to understand!.
But that's the beauty of it!.
I'll work at it!.



Overall I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com