I know there's a lot of these, but... plz critique!?

Question: I know there's a lot of these, but!.!.!. plz critique!!?

i've recently written two poems, and i'd really like to know how they are!. i think they are fabulous, but then again, that's just my point of view [=

i can't fit it all here right now, so i'm going to add the two later in details!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sweet!. Blunt and whole!. I liked the way you didn't spend three hours on flowery illustrations, you said it as it was and showed that you meant it!. It was a honest and human poem and for me, human is the best thing a poem can be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg i love it, especially the second one, the metaphors are so rich in meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

don't post information regarding something we can't see yet!. \Www@QuestionHome@Com

I will read it later!.!.!.!. I cant wait!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ok
cool
ill check in tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

Please enlighten usWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry it doesn`t even sound like a poem at all!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its long!.
longer than most
I stopped half way through
to butter some toast
and then I decided
to start once again
but now its bedtime
so god knows when
I'll finish your poem
a marathon task
but I'm not quite certain
If I can be arsed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com