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Question: I tried one of the one word things, what do you think!?
two
souls
make
goals

two
hearts
one
start

love
kindles
fear
dwindles

new
love
always
enough

man
wife
new
life

happy
together
lovers
foreverWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's just no end to your rhyming ability and your imaginative creativity, is there!? Cute, interestingly refreshing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honesty, usually lacking in this section (lol) !. !. !.

I can't stand the form, although I like what you've done!. I feel that the form lends itself to cliche-ical (if that's a word) poetry, so even though I *do* feel that it is a cliche, I don't blame you!.

All in all, not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Two souls
make goals!.

Two hearts
with one!.start

Love kindles
while fears dwindle

New love
is always enough

A man with his wife
has a new life

They are happy together
look like lovers forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWW! that is so sweet! it's clever too!. and thanks for answering my questions because everyone else is a jerk and doesnt even take the time to read anything!. i think this is cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's good
God blessWww@QuestionHome@Com

awww!.!.!.thats really cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very cool, lol I likey !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com