Lalalalalalallalalallal

Question: Lalalalalalallalalallalalalala!.!.!. poem!?

You're the star that shines down on me,
to show me there's something in this world to see!.
You're the cloud that raises me above everyone else,
to make me realize I just need to be myself!.
You're the sun that comes to brighten my day,
when I just wanna fade away!.
You're the moon that sits so elegantly in the sky,
making me wish it could be just you and I!.
And I just wish u could see,
You're everything and more to me!.
Cuz your alls I got,
hot or not,
kevin scott!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

LOL! ha, that is great! I'm still smiling, you have a Shel Silverstein air about your work!. The rhythm and meter is a bit off, but then, that's just my flavor!. I prefer poetry that flows in a rhythm of sorts, without redundancy of course, and yours is sporadic!. Fortunately though, many people don't care so much that poetry follows rhythm etc!., and also, your subject matter is sentimental, uplifting, creative, and definitely funny!. Well done, keep on posting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol its good i like how u added a name 2 itWww@QuestionHome@Com