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Into the heart of the matter my friend, Consciousness and the self, Did you hear what the wind was stating, states of matter and changes of state, I could hear the autumn leaves drifting away, the chemical evolution of life,the silent cry,frozen tears of the heart, Into the heart of the matter my friend!. jimi 06/11/08Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Jimi, you are becoming the Poet of Yahoo Q&A!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, Jimi, I like it very much!. A suggestion: break it into shorter lines so you lose the prose effect!. You probably don't want any line breaks; for me it is easier to work with a smaller section rather the long lines that could become short, sharp, quick thrusts!. Into the heart of the matter my friend, Consciousness and the self, Did you hear what the wind was stating, states of matter and changes of state, I could hear the autumn leaves drifting away, the chemical evolution of life, the silent cry, frozen tears of the heart, Into the heart of the matter, my friend!. T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like to read poetry, but I love to write poetry, helps me get rid of some emotionWww@QuestionHome@Com It is very good!. It is deep!Www@QuestionHome@Com not so badWww@QuestionHome@Com yeah it's greatWww@QuestionHome@Com wwwwwwwwwwwouh!!Actually,i guess it's great & special dude!u're the best!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't get it!. And that is NOT a good sign!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |