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Question: Any opinoins!?
Faded Glory
You’re a has been
A had been, desperate, lonely old and abandoned!.
It’s in the darkness of your skin,
The rings about your eyes
The itch, the need for attention
That’s in your smile,
And it’s disgusting!.
Maybe once…………!.!.
There was something about you!.
When you smile I see it…but its long gone now,
Faded,
Into the rings of fat under your belly skin!.
Faded,
Into the too-tanned tone of your face!.
Jaded,
Thinking about baby blues,
Looking for a baby of your own!.
Yeah you’re a has been……!.!.
Cause your days only fade away…
Until night offers a cover……
And you can try to appear as something other!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The tone reminds me of a Bob Dylan song, "How Does it Feel!?" It's highly spirited and nasty/funny!. I like it a lot!. I'll keep an eye out for your work, and I promise to give you my honest "opinoins" if you promise to spell it right!. If I calculate correctly, you might not even be in your teens yet!. If that is so, you show remarkable talent!. Keep on writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
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i really liked it!. it could be a song, actually!.
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