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Position:Home>Poetry> How can i end this poem? help please!?Question: How can i end this poem!? help please!!? i'm saying goodbye to you because, you've done nothing but trick me,
and backstab me, into believing you loved me!. and that you were someone i could turn to, but instead you made me lose my family, friends, and my self esteem!. you're a selfish bastard that wanted me all to yourself and you took everything i had, and smiled because you knew you had me !. all the dreams i had you've turned into night mares!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: If you would take pride in it, I suggest you reach deeper and answer your own question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm saying goodbye to you because, you've done nothing but trick me, and back stab me, into believing you loved me!. and that you were someone i could turn to, but instead you made me lose my family, friends, and my self esteem!. you're a selfish bastard that wanted me all to yourself and you took everything i had, and smiled because you knew you had me !. all the dreams i had you've turned into night mares I have tried to think of a fitting end though I don't know what is wrong with it now!. the problem I, as an individual reader, am having, is finding the correct music, if it were, to place the song in contextWww@QuestionHome@Com Either give it to the person to whom you wrote it or throw it in the garbage!. It's a personal poem that only you and that person really "get!." You should wait a while to write about an emotionally trying experience so it doesn't sound too sappyWww@QuestionHome@Com Go away and never show your ugly face around me again or I'll call the police and have a peace warrant served against you to stay away and not to stalk me again!. I want your ugly *** in Jail!Www@QuestionHome@Com In my honest opinion, your poem is too wordy!. How about something like this!? saying goodbye trick me backstab me detour me selfish bastard Take everything Go awayWww@QuestionHome@Com Yarf! Doggerel! Why don't you write the flame letter you're burning to send, THEN consider a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good bye, good bye, and don't look back bare!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |