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Question: Did I make any errors!?
A simple spelling and grammar check… if you could tell me what you think of the poem as well then I would be glad for it!
HerStar
Fear encompassed by the wait
a weight un-thought and still un-standing
Understanding all the maze
a gaze at fangs from death demanding
The step of fate to guide the night-sight
Bereft of life and left with forsake
to breathe an air and err for not
great rapport, a share forgot
Take hold, my child, of life and leisure
leave behind the mind and measure
Treasure of requited hell
and falling fell, already fallen
to die and oath of maiden solemn
I am the Mourning Star!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A bit hard to follow but I have no room to talk!.!.!. much of poetry is elusive in its wording and message!. This is beautiful, Iffy, just!.!.!. indescribable!Www@QuestionHome@Com
great answer mine!?!!? http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am glad to see you are out again, writing!.!.!. we were beginning to worry!
I love the poem, do not know what more to say!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a flowing work of art!. My unworthy hands shall not touch it, sweet Mourning Star!Www@QuestionHome@Com
you know me, sis, i can't point out an err if it smacked me in the!.!.!.!.!.!.!. face, of coarse!Www@QuestionHome@Com
very insightful!.!.!. and the language is so moving!.
so taken with it that i cannot look for errors!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com