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Yellow

The scent of yellow roses, embedded forever by my part,
petals shriven and shrunken, warped by your sacred heart!.
A light serenade of laughter, a flutes pitch, a puggles bark,
all fused into a package, an enigma of the matter-dark

A precious blissful gathering, forever will be the 4,
foolish hearts and premature thoughts, eternal, yet never more!.
Our footprints ancient remain, eight marks of different size,
distorted yet inthorted, our folic evidence, display the mystery of our fleeing time

fragmented shards of bleeding glass, forever in your name,
the cruel spirit of the one beloved, the 4 will always remain
the ruby drawn gems of a past life, set stained into crystal display
the reasons for it's donations are clearer then where it lays,

An 8 foot tongue of anarchy swithered, slashing and dashing with its take
an acid, a hallucagent, a baurbituant,
the clash of a broken mistake!.
through the eyes of familiar breath, strength and life renew,Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its is a good poem!.!.you really have the talent to do it!.!.!.i really appreciate all the context of the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

eeeh!.!.!. not gonna says its all that great, i mean its kinda longWww@QuestionHome@Com

well the flow is good, what is the 4!?Www@QuestionHome@Com