My complete poem, but its long?

Question: My complete poem, but its long!?

I had an idea of a mirror that inside evil lived and when people looked into it they became hypnotized and the thing inside would reach out the mirror and choke their youth and kill them lol

heres the final version http://poetrysamateur!.wordpress!.com/2008!.!.!.
it wouldnt let me fit it all on here so :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow, that was nice! i liked it!.

no, i didn't think it was too long!. i've written a few, and man, one of those was a doozy!

keep writing!. it seems to me like you have a knack at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It reminds me of the story of Narcissus!.

Remember devil is the mirror image of lived, and I had this same idea years ago, and when you realize that evil was behind glass!. You become somewhat empowered, until you realize the flip side would be that you weren't really keeping evil behind the mirror!. Evil was keeping you behind a tempered glass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its deep & a bit dark in a way i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMG! It's beautiful! you have so much talent! On a scale of 1-10 I'll give u a perfect 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com