How do you like this fun poem ?

Question: How do you like this fun poem !?

The Old Girls Tale

What a pity
The old girl cried
Its so tragic
I could cry
On the pavement
Thats where he lie
No-one would help him
As they passed by
Transfixed with fear
That was I
Standing there
A tear in my eye
For I knew
He was about to die
And I would have to
Say goodbye
As poor Lizy Lizard
is now
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It's a good poem!. You stayed true to your form!. And I like the ending!. Keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome poem, kind of sad but understandeable,and good rhying, i also write poems and quotes, so stay encourage, keep on writting!. good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, its got a nice rhythm to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats really cute!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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ha!. thats great!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

HAHA! Very cute!. I love it*~!~*Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol! IT'S FUNNYWww@QuestionHome@Com