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Question: My Viking song , please read!?
Buried in an icy grave, and then the sun shone oh
Waking after one thousand years ,emerging from the snow!.!.!.
He said are all of the vikings dead,over in iceland oh
Im looking for my boat, but its covered in snow!.
How they did scramble through the sliding snow
How they did save their loved ones oh,their loved ones oh
How they went smashing through a glass and bricken window,
when falling through the air on a downward ho!.
I'll tell you a story that my heart does know, of the strong young men who went drenched in sorrow , when weakened by the thought of a painful tomorrow , where they would run without knowing where their feet ever go!.
Searching for the lost in the ice and snow,
Cross iceland and meadow and then homeward ohWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is very good!. I will still add a little bit of a story-line to it because I still don't really know what you are talking about!. also, I don't get how you said, "I'm looking for my boat, but it's covered in snow!." If you didn't know where your boat was, how did you know that it was covered in snow!. I like the rhyming and everything!. Just clean it up a tad bit!. Good job, take a star! ? :-)

My grade for this poem: B+Www@QuestionHome@Com